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Chalmette Guy Senior Member
since 2009-03-11
Posts 1257Louisiana 
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Never have I ever felt so alive Then here with you, in the dark Feeding on you Subsisting on you And your flesh, not leaving a mark Stealing your essence from within My mouth locked on tight Draining you Weakening you As I devour through the night The taste sends me into frenzy Need this to somehow sustain Feasting on you Taking all of you Languishing unrestrained Living a life of hunger nocturne Taste the heat of my breath Warming you Living through you Dying my thousandth death |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
CG..maybe it is my craving for cajun food, but I got all jiggy for some mudbugs and dirty rice while reading this...used to close down the jin just before dawn and head over to some bad side of town greasy spit place and do a mess of em as I watched the sun come up over the cypress tree hairdos sorry to be so far off track..but it was good for me to day dream it |
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Chalmette Guy Senior Member
since 2009-03-11
Posts 1257Louisiana |
You describe my homeland perfectly DS. Many good memories in the bad parts of town as the sun came up. lol |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Sexuality and vampirism are inextricably intertwined. Some of the hottest reading I've enjoyed was just such descriptions. And dayum I'm feeling a bit anemic now.  |
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Chalmette Guy Senior Member
since 2009-03-11
Posts 1257Louisiana |
Know what you mean K. You ever notice how in books and movies that the vampire is always portrayed as some good looking dude/chick? Never as some horribly disfigured undead reeking thing. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Well I think you'd have to go back to the classics--or local lore. *laughing* I've seen some bad teefers 'round this town.  |
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Chalmette Guy Senior Member
since 2009-03-11
Posts 1257Louisiana |
Especially lately I bet. lol |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Oh, I'm looking for a dentist. After that bout with Rifampin, I'll be the first to confess mine are wretched. (At least they aren't orange anymore. I felt like a friggin' nutria!) So I'm thinking I'd like to have my entire bottom yanked. And I'm willing to venture you have an understanding of that inclination too!   <--teefersoh my...I gotta run. Goin' out tonight. Gonna go check out Bobby Cure and his band. Remember them?  |
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Chalmette Guy Senior Member
since 2009-03-11
Posts 1257Louisiana |
Yanking...what? :innocent: And yeah, went to school with Bobby's nephew. And met Bobby through a friend of mine in the music scene a couple times. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
The replies were as much fun to read as the write! Bottom yanking, K? LOL. Thought you were done with that. Loved DS reply, though I can't do that meal myself. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Taste the heat of my breath Warming you Living through you Shivers run down my spine... and not from fear. LOL To borrow serenity's term... dayum, you can WRITE!!! *S* Wonderful work! |
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Chalmette Guy Senior Member
since 2009-03-11
Posts 1257Louisiana |
Thank you midnite, and that's ok. It's the joy of that feast to me that inspired the write. *S* |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
MS is right... the replies were fun... though the image of serenity with nutria teeth was as effective as a dunking in ice water. LOL |
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Chalmette Guy Senior Member
since 2009-03-11
Posts 1257Louisiana |
Yeah, I agree. Especially from my perspective. lol |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
sorry? *wince*  *note the closed mouth* But um, I'd think a guy would like the idea of removable teeth.  (and oh I know DS is enjoying this, too.) I'll tell Bobby you said hey, if you like? And yer missin' out--I might even get to sing.  The hubby will be sittin' in too, though. (*ahem*) and... Did you know Antionette Kado passed away? It's some sad times...Eddie Bo, too. Dayum. *shaking my head* Seriously though, I enjoyed the write. *hugs* |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Enjoyed those summertime blues, K... *S* The fun in the responses is lagniappe on a fantastic poem. *S* |
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viking_metal Senior Member
since 2007-02-02
Posts 1337In a Jeep, Minnesota. |
Very cool. I have a secret fear that I, in fact, will be the first one to be killed by vampires. :-/ -P Some people fall in love and touch the sky, some people fall in love and find quicksand. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
and tsk... I just got canceled.  Now what am I supposed to do with all this bondo on my face?  Oh. I'll bet that left marks. Maybe next time? *shrug* Born under an unlucky star, I am... |
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unboundpoetess Member
since 2008-05-24
Posts 477 |
<~ secret vamp fetish Makes me miss True Blood. That's my show. Anyway...Nice write. I read you often. Heather |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
shew....they sure do like it hot in the south, this really spicy and cajun...lol I might just leave my window open tonight.. ~ARH  |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
I had the last of my natural teeth pulled when I was twenty-five. It's the best thing I ever did for myself. Now I can bite anyone. Bobby |
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