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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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you were accidental willing when I was wicker wickeding like stabbing straw into the water we felt the end of ourselves pressing against the metal we had made the armor for our hearts out of your nails scratched my back boards as I wrote you poems mostly with only those four letter words that were loveless but you knew better as if I wasn't really that ruthless but you said you did prefer my animal to the condition of my mostly human tender ______________ daark (viscosity) |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
I like the animal and the tender  you do both so well [This message has been edited by SEA (03-26-2009 12:01 AM).] |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Both work for me. *S* I like this very much! *S* (I can never be ruthless LOL) |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms suesea, thanks babe.. ________________ ms suthern..thanks lady R...never ruthless..that is cute!! |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Is there a ballot box I can punch for "poet"? That's the you I know and love the best.  |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms serene.... thanks babe...you always smile me |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
"to the condition of my mostly human tender" i like that mostly human tender i think i will have it written on the back of my car window in fact...i might ask you to steal that phrase it would be a great title for a book on poetry think i could steal it huh huh huh? |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
with only those four letter words that were loveless but you knew better ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Love it when your heart is showing. I gotta four letter word for ya....woof! |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
You give the impression of being the perfect mix of both conditions, dear Poet D.! My favorite four letter word is LOVE. It dominates all other four letter words and contains simply everything and everything springs from it. LOVE, Margherita  |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms slick...it is yours...thanks babe ____________ ms bluezy..yeah I have one for you too.."talk", thanks babe ________________ ms mar, thanks lady friend |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
And this is the reason that I go back in time. How did I miss this poem, D? It's wonderful and it must have been yelling for me to read it. I am glad that I have. A |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
thanks ali-san...your go backs are a treat to receive.. |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
A four letter word to best describe you..... "POET". A treat sir. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
thanks amigo..I am blessed by your comment |
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