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Open Poetry #44

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viking_metal
Senior Member

since 2007-02-02

Posts 1337
In a Jeep, Minnesota.

0 posted 2009-03-25 12:42 PM

Allow me the privilege
of disturbing your liquid skin
with my statue hands.

Slowly and sensually
shedding each piece
of long distance clothing.

Wrap your mouth around
the specific words,
making my heartbeat granite.

I will wrap myself
around you,
a starfish in the four-day-long
oceanic coral reef
ridges of your body.

Cement yourself
into this hotel bedroom
and shower with me
in the morning.

___________________________________________
Texas Girl. More of a "Journal entry" than anything, but I wanted everybody to know I'm still alive.

Some people fall in love and touch the sky, some people fall in love and find quicksand.

[This message has been edited by viking_metal (03-26-2009 12:44 PM).]

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2009-03-25 12:50 PM

still alive and making hearts beat a little faster

viking_metal
Senior Member

since 2007-02-02

Posts 1337
In a Jeep, Minnesota.

2 posted 2009-03-25 01:31 AM

I do my best, madame SEA. You're the bomb.

Some people fall in love and touch the sky, some people fall in love and find quicksand.

Boshii2
Member

since 2009-02-01

Posts 146

3 posted 2009-03-25 07:57 AM

I have missed you .I pedalled the generator to open my computer to find you and read of your latest escapades and here you are at last.
Dont wash.
love from Boshii2

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

4 posted 2009-03-25 09:18 AM

Allow me the privilege
of disturbing your liquid skin
with my statue hands.

Wonderful title and poem! *S*

viking_metal
Senior Member

since 2007-02-02

Posts 1337
In a Jeep, Minnesota.

5 posted 2009-03-25 02:49 PM

Boshii... Thanks darlin'. I have missed reading of your minds corners as well.

Suthern... Thanks very much. I'm glad you enjoyed the read.

Some people fall in love and touch the sky, some people fall in love and find quicksand.

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

6 posted 2009-03-25 09:18 PM

Wow there's more twists and turns in this than a political platform trying to please people on both sides of the road.

Good stuff!

Eric

viking_metal
Senior Member

since 2007-02-02

Posts 1337
In a Jeep, Minnesota.

7 posted 2009-03-26 12:52 PM

Thanks man. Good to hear from you again. Thanks for reading my poetic stab.

-P

Some people fall in love and touch the sky, some people fall in love and find quicksand.

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