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Fizzle Junior Member
since 2009-03-21
Posts 38 |
I am filled no more with doubt, It is stored away in file Years have passed since my first pout Yet I've hardly cracked an honest smile But I've held and soldiered on Hardly stopping for a look I have never gone along since I buried myself in books It was a mistake, as always To think that I, alone could do it my way and happily walk on Note: My very first! [This message has been edited by Fizzle (03-22-2009 10:08 PM).] |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
I think this is very good, Diego. Love, Margherita |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
It was a mistake, as always To think that I, alone could do it my way and happily walk on I'm well acquainted with this same mistake... and keep making it! *S* I liked this very much... welcome to Passions! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"But I've held and soldiered on Hardly stopping for a look I have never gone along since I buried myself in books" ~ I hearya! Hey, now you can write your own books of poetry to read!!!   EA |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
good one! |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Diego, I wish my first was as good as yours. I am suffering from "first" envy. Thank you for sharing this. Alison |
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WTBAKELAR
since 2008-09-09
Posts 1089Utah, USA |
Happily walk on I think the moral of the story, or final line, makes for a wonderful title to this poem.. Well done, Tracey |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Good first write, Diego. Hope to see many more. Ida |
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