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Open Poetry #44

Darkness

Dark Star
Member

since 2008-02-20

Posts 392
Lost in your eyes

0 posted 2009-03-22 07:50 PM

The darkness in everyone
creeps through them
at very emotional times.

The black ink
that runs through
your stream.
what's left of you.

But, I have hope
you are the shinning knight
I need to live and
survive the darkness

you

Lana
XOXOXO
...

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

1 posted 2009-03-22 07:52 PM

Nice approach and much truth.

The knight is coming for you someday......(smile)...

Very creative.

Eric

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

2 posted 2009-03-22 07:57 PM

Wishing you a shining knight instead of the 'dark ink' kind.

Dark Star
Member

since 2008-02-20

Posts 392
Lost in your eyes

3 posted 2009-03-22 07:59 PM

thanks guys, I know the knight's out there, somewhere

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

4 posted 2009-03-22 11:45 PM

Enjoyed this

ARCTIC WIND

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

5 posted 2009-03-23 08:38 AM

But, I have hope
you are the shinning knight
I need to live and
survive the darkness

And hope can make all the difference. *S* I like this very much!!

Dark Star
Member

since 2008-02-20

Posts 392
Lost in your eyes

6 posted 2009-03-23 11:29 AM

aw,

Dark Star
Member

since 2008-02-20

Posts 392
Lost in your eyes

7 posted 2009-03-23 11:29 AM

thnx S

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