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Suncleaver
Member

since 2009-01-18

Posts 481
Stafford England

0 posted 2009-03-22 07:37 PM

Through meadows of heaven
We tread softly
For all here is sacred,
Life eternal.

Far from the mortal sphere
I have brought you
Upon words of power
And starlight threads.

See my rainbow wings spread,
Horizon's end,
If only you could see
you have wings too.

Out of reach, out of sight
I feel strange and lost
Can you lead me right?
It's too dark for me to see,
capture of soul won't you please forgive me

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2009-03-22 07:42 PM

very nice Luke!

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

2 posted 2009-03-22 07:44 PM

Enjoyed this beautiful Piece!

ARCTIC WIND

A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

3 posted 2009-03-23 01:58 AM

Your wings will take you to places you have never known,
just allow them to fly,
all the beautiful colors reflect the beauty of ones heart!

I really like the picture you posted for this poem...its nice here..in the meadow..

your quote caught my eye....

I am with you in spirit...

~Warm Hugs ~ARH

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

4 posted 2009-03-23 08:46 AM

"If only you could see
you have wings too."

~ A beautiful closing to a heavenly piece of writing!

Love & Angel Light,
Linda

SPIRIT
Senior Member

since 2002-12-29

Posts 1745
California Desert

5 posted 2009-03-23 09:02 AM

Everything is just 'picture perfect'.

Dinah

Raindance
Member

since 2009-02-07

Posts 120
West Coast

6 posted 2009-03-23 09:38 AM

Suncleaver, Your words are so very moving. I would love to print this out with the picture and frame it. Beautiful!

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

7 posted 2009-03-23 09:51 AM

You are beautifully inspired. Love the picture too.

Love,
Margherita

Suncleaver
Member

since 2009-01-18

Posts 481
Stafford England

8 posted 2009-03-23 11:59 AM

I thank you all deeply for your comments on this poem and the support you have lent to me over the last few months.

Raindance, if you would like to print and frame this poem I would be deeply honoured.

Out of reach, out of sight
I feel strange and lost
Can you lead me right?
It's too dark for me to see,
capture of soul won't you please forgive me

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

9 posted 2009-03-24 12:16 PM

This is just a perfect delight, Luke.
Ida

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

10 posted 2009-03-24 12:24 PM

Suncleaver - yes, very nice writing, I like it...

BC

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

11 posted 2009-03-24 09:13 AM

I wish I could give those last 2 lines to my friends... with my thanks... and my hopes that they'll believe. *S* Beautiful work!

Chalmette Guy
Senior Member

since 2009-03-11

Posts 1257
Louisiana

12 posted 2009-03-24 11:28 AM

Yes, very nice poem.

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