Open Poetry #44 |
Thoughts of You. |
Windhover Member
since 2003-11-17
Posts 179UK |
On wintering nights of bitter frost when all the warmth of life is lost; as spectral mist swirls in the air... I think of you with the fragrant hair. When wind is moaning in the pines and icy fingers touch the spine, as strangled autumn slowly dies... I think of you with the laughing eyes. When darkened clouds, foreboding doom, fly swift, before a leprous moon; as hoarfrost from the blackthorn drips... I think of you with the soft, sweet lips. When hail, its palsied fingers train and scrabble on the windowpane; as gables whimper under tile... I think of you with the gentle smile. When, on such bleak and bitter nights, primeval fear lurks out of sight, and frightened thoughts, dark tendrils trace... I think of you with the radiant face. No earth-bound force can misalign the shuttered refuge of my mind. Encompassed in that secret place... My soft, sweet thoughts of you. |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"When wind is moaning in the pines and icy fingers touch the spine, as strangled autumn slowly dies... I think of you with the laughing eyes. " lovely |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
I'd have to highlight the entire piece to pick a favorite. But this definitely got me: "as spectral mist swirls in the air..." Anything with 'spectral mists' and romantic overtones as opposed to ghosts is fine with me! |
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Fizzle Junior Member
since 2009-03-21
Posts 38 |
One word: Beautiful. Really. I love that the person is held up as some sort of amulet against all despair; Cupid's most common request, perhaps. Thanks for sharing. |
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