Open Poetry #44 |
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the land of serendipity |
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Midnitesun![]()
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia ![]() |
Feel the heat! The travel ad was enticing me to venture to ‘ol Mexico. So off I swam to warm southern waters, alongside schools of fantasy fish and frolicking dolphins in an aquamarine sea, downing Margheritas at sunset, just my lover and me, then twirling to mariachi music ‘neath a star-blossom sky. Not a care in the world, no pain, suffering, or strife. No economic downturns to chill the night, just hot amber sands, aqua seas, cerulean skies watching fishing boats filled with smiling locals and touristas casting their mutual story lines while we sat soaking in a fiery sunset, sipping Margheritas in the land of serendipity. Would you like to vacation with me? |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
"hot amber sands, aqua seas, cerulean skies ..." fine (word-painted) southern Shangri-La imagery ... a most pleasant 'alternative reality' penning!! |
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Marc-Andre Senior Member
since 2008-12-07
Posts 501 |
Midnitesun, book for me too ![]() Mark |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Ooh, yes, I'd love to, Kacy - swimming with the fantasy fish and the frolicking dolphins sold me immediately! The rest would be great too! Owl |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Lovely Write! ![]() ARCTIC WIND |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
'neath a star-blossom sky. Sounds just wonderful, Kacy. Ida |
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suthern![]() ![]()
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Yes, please. *S* |
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Midnitesun![]()
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Grin, guess we need a poetry charter plane? WOW, imagine what fun that might be, to have a poet party at some warm beach hideaway? |
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Alison![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Off hand, I can't think of anyone I would rather vacation with at the moment. It would be fun - and I bet I could out-white you! Love this poem, Kacy girl. Love, A |
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WTBAKELAR![]()
since 2008-09-09
Posts 1089Utah, USA |
Sign me up for this poets dream vacation. Nice write. Tracey |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
yes ... I imagine a very many of us these days could use a 'touch' of those: "frolicking dolphins in an aquamarine sea... ‘neath a star-blossom sky(!)" continuing applause for this 'penning' !! |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
You would get a job writing adds for any travel company dear Kacy and how I wish I could be sitting in the sun with you on that beautiful beach. great post. love. Lindsay |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Your picture postcard poetry is most inviting. Love the places you take us to, Kacy! |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo dear Kacy, Mexico is a wonderful country. I’ve spent a lot of time doing engineering work in the Tampico area. I found the people to be wonderfully kind, and I have many good friends there. One of them has come to visit here in Philadelphia. I could never really get into the Margheritas though, too much work to do. I don't think you ever get to know a nation until you have worked there with the people. I've been lucky enough to work in many countries. Love Bobby |
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