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Open Poetry #44
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eminor_angel
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0 posted 2009-03-20 03:13 PM

We watch the night sky
You and I together

My rib, the crescent moon

You gaze above you

My fingers, a constellation

You gaze above you

My hair, a comet's tail

We watch the night sky
You and I in silence

You lift me up into orbit

(Watch me fall)
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Midnitesun
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1 posted 2009-03-20 05:04 PM

Maybe you'll stay in orbit and not fall?
Artic Wind
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2 posted 2009-03-20 06:28 PM

I agree with midnitesun LOL


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