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| Open Poetry #44 |
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Imperfect |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Imperfect In this small, quiet place deep inside That ripples from nothingness to highest tide In mere detail of my every thought Caresses farther reaching than such footfalls wrought Shaping your mouth to the form of my lips Sculpting your skin danced beneath fingertips Perhaps out of reach in these times far apart Ever the nearer at home in my heart Your mind is the blade that dissects fact from truth Every morsel about me presumed beyond proof In the absence of fact, quick to fill void and vale This emotional well so disposed to set sail Or take flight on the tide lifted near to the sky So intent on the wind chimes dallied pleasantly by Dreams meant to dream, as the sun meant to shine In this small, quiet place imperfections align Copyright Kkh 3/19/09 |
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Chalmette Guy Senior Member
since 2009-03-11
Posts 1257Louisiana |
"imperfections align" Love this poem! |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
It's amazing how imperfections can add up to a kind of perfection and we all keep searching, sometimes for ourselves. This is simply great!! Eric |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed the Write TD!  ARCTIC WIND |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
scrumpdilicious.....?? Well, sorta..... HI U |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
TD...the imperfect perfect...human and devine, like this poem. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Every morsel about me presumed beyond proof In the absence of fact, quick to fill void and vale So many jewels in this beautiful write... but these two lines really resonate in me. *S* |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
quote: I loved all of this poem, but I really loved those lines. Thank you for writing and sharing, A |
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