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Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2009-03-20 07:34 AM

it was only under imaginary afternoons
when you did those things with the sun
and bent it around your pretty places

chips and salsa kind of kiss thinking
with our eyes closed worldly wide
taking time not to hurry imagination time

and then walking behind you beside you
wishing you were behind me beside me too
and that your jewelry was on the table

under the window without drapery winds
and that you would wear it again tomorrow
way later in the evening if we went dancing

but for now nothing was all you really needed

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daark (viscosity)

Chalmette Guy
Senior Member

since 2009-03-11

Posts 1257
Louisiana

1 posted 2009-03-20 08:27 AM

Nothing sometimes is...everything.

Great sentiments Dark.

inkedgoddess
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since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

2 posted 2009-03-20 09:13 AM

like the flavor
the salsa and the twist
of your rhyme

Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

3 posted 2009-03-20 09:33 AM

CG, thanks guy

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ms inky, thanks babe

suthern

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since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

4 posted 2009-03-20 12:17 PM

but for now nothing was all you really needed

The perfect attire... adorned in anticipation. *S* Loved this!!!

Robert E. Jordan
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since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

5 posted 2009-03-20 12:24 PM

Yo Dark Stranger,

You've nailed it right. Nothing is always best.

Bobby

Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

6 posted 2009-03-20 01:06 PM

ms suthern, thanks babe...

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BJ..thanks amigo, very true!

tao power
Member

since 2009-02-24

Posts 109

7 posted 2009-03-20 03:45 PM

I like the odd juxtapositions of words but what do chips and salsa have to do with kissing? I didnt get that part.

Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

8 posted 2009-03-20 03:52 PM

tp..out here in mexico, calif, chips and salsa are appetizers before the main dish..they are they flirty food before the in depth savoring begins..thanks

[This message has been edited by Dark Stranger (03-20-2009 06:08 PM).]

ethome
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since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

9 posted 2009-03-20 06:03 PM

Dark

I'm so glad to read that you got your oil checked. It's quite refreshing by times. Good for another 5000.

I'm worried because I think I understood this part....
"and then walking behind you beside you
wishing you were behind me beside me too
and that your jewelry was on the table"

Great work my friend. Don't mind me I'm just your all purpose clown in love with the romance of life.

Eric

Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

10 posted 2009-03-20 06:07 PM

Eric..

I enjoy your comments...and yes, in love with love...it can't be better..(or worse)

Thanks amigo

Artic Wind
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since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

11 posted 2009-03-20 06:39 PM

Wonderful Penning Dark Stranger!!

ARCTIC WIND

Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

12 posted 2009-03-21 12:07 PM

Dark Stranger - I like the words and thoughts of this writing, well written...

BC

Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

13 posted 2009-03-21 06:28 AM

AW, thanks amigo

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BC, humble thanks guy

vandana

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since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

14 posted 2009-03-21 11:54 AM

good read

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

15 posted 2009-03-22 03:01 PM

quote:
chips and salsa kind of kiss thinking
with our eyes closed worldly wide
taking time not to hurry imagination time

I adore your imagination, dear D.!

This is pure delight.

Love,
Margherita

Alison

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since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

16 posted 2009-03-22 09:02 PM

D

Spicy salsa makes for spicier kisses. You know, I can't take a part of your poetry to single out. I read it as a whole - it's a story of sensual beauty. You leave me longing for more.

A

Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

17 posted 2009-03-23 06:06 AM

ms van, thanks

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ms mar, thank you lady friend

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ms ali-san, thanks babe, chili oatmeal is the bomb

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