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bender of salsa sun |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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it was only under imaginary afternoons when you did those things with the sun and bent it around your pretty places chips and salsa kind of kiss thinking with our eyes closed worldly wide taking time not to hurry imagination time and then walking behind you beside you wishing you were behind me beside me too and that your jewelry was on the table under the window without drapery winds and that you would wear it again tomorrow way later in the evening if we went dancing but for now nothing was all you really needed ______________ daark (viscosity) |
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Chalmette Guy Senior Member
since 2009-03-11
Posts 1257Louisiana |
Nothing sometimes is...everything. Great sentiments Dark. |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
like the flavor the salsa and the twist of your rhyme  |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
CG, thanks guy _____________ ms inky, thanks babe |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
but for now nothing was all you really needed The perfect attire... adorned in anticipation. *S* Loved this!!! |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo Dark Stranger, You've nailed it right. Nothing is always best. Bobby |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms suthern, thanks babe... ___________ BJ..thanks amigo, very true! |
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tao power Member
since 2009-02-24
Posts 109 |
I like the odd juxtapositions of words but what do chips and salsa have to do with kissing? I didnt get that part. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
tp..out here in mexico, calif, chips and salsa are appetizers before the main dish..they are they flirty food before the in depth savoring begins..thanks [This message has been edited by Dark Stranger (03-20-2009 06:08 PM).] |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Dark I'm so glad to read that you got your oil checked. It's quite refreshing by times. Good for another 5000. I'm worried because I think I understood this part.... "and then walking behind you beside you wishing you were behind me beside me too and that your jewelry was on the table" Great work my friend. Don't mind me I'm just your all purpose clown in love with the romance of life. Eric |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Eric.. I enjoy your comments...and yes, in love with love...it can't be better..(or worse) Thanks amigo |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Wonderful Penning Dark Stranger!! ARCTIC WIND |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Dark Stranger - I like the words and thoughts of this writing, well written... BC |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
AW, thanks amigo _______________ BC, humble thanks guy |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
good read |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: I adore your imagination, dear D.! This is pure delight. Love, Margherita |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
D Spicy salsa makes for spicier kisses. You know, I can't take a part of your poetry to single out. I read it as a whole - it's a story of sensual beauty. You leave me longing for more. A |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms van, thanks _______________ ms mar, thank you lady friend ________________ ms ali-san, thanks babe, chili oatmeal is the bomb |
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