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Dark Star
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Lost in your eyes

0 posted 2009-03-19 12:17 PM




Him

Walking down those stairs
so beautifully created

I remember this perfectly,
seeing him down the hallway

perfect face and features,
perfect smell of heaven.

That single moment when
he passed by me, was an moment
I would never want to end.

I am so lucky that he's mine
stay with me


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A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart
1 posted 2009-03-19 12:33 PM


Him...who ever he is is a very lucky guy to have such beautiful words written for him....

you have a beautiful heart,
keep penning the love from within...

~ARH

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with you
2 posted 2009-03-19 12:42 PM


really enjoyed this, know the feeling
Dark Star
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Lost in your eyes
3 posted 2009-03-19 12:44 PM


ARH, Thank u for those kind words

Starr

Dark Star
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Lost in your eyes
4 posted 2009-03-19 12:44 PM


SEA

its a wonderful feeling

Chalmette Guy
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Louisiana
5 posted 2009-03-19 12:51 PM


I know this feeling as well. Except replace the 'him' with 'her'. lol

Well done.

Dark Star
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Lost in your eyes
6 posted 2009-03-19 12:55 PM


lol, thnx

Artic Wind
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Realm of Supernatural
7 posted 2009-03-19 12:59 PM


These are Wonderful thoughts dark Star!!!!


ARCTIC WIND

Dark Star
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Lost in your eyes
8 posted 2009-03-19 01:00 PM


artic, thnx

Margherita
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Eternity
9 posted 2009-03-19 01:14 PM


You have rendered this moment in time indelible for your heart and expressed it well!

Love,
Margherita

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