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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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"You, There" Rainy day thoughts to comfort the mind with the hope of tomorrow knowing its find is the rise of the sun and once full of moon, in pleasure from seeking the nearness of soon. Too soon is of never when never can wait. Contentment the proof of a "togetherness state" when each thought is of comfort to a rainy day mind, with the hope of tomorrow and a "You, There" in find. for "You" M |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Oh thank you Maureen. I appreciate that. Should I wear a suit and tie or is this going to be casual? You've got me all excited now. No one has ever written a poem just for me before and this is such a good one. Ah, the mood, I'll warm up your rainy day thoughts. Love ya kid! Eric |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Come as you are, anytime  Made me smile, Eric, thanks!  M |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Up-beat, lyrical, and downright adorable!!! Loved it! ~ As did E T Home, I see! lol Love & Irish blessings, Linda |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
A beautifully written smile-piece, lady M. |
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Oklahoma Rose Senior Member
since 2008-02-28
Posts 1586Oklahoma USA |
Beautiful Maureen. It would be nice to find someone there in each of our tomorrows, wouldn't it. I have thought about that, quite often. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
You have such a wonderful way of writing between the lines. Love your poem and your style. warm hugs~ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
whoa, I hope he sees but prolly not since he's got a ..."gulp" |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
when each thought is of comfort to a rainy day mind, with the hope of tomorrow and a "You, There" in find. I love this beautiful, romantic write! *S* |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Maureen - perhaps if I wear a tie also, and the black leather jacket... BC |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
"when each thought is of comfort to a rainy day mind, with the hope of tomorrow.." yes, "the worst 'death' is likely the surrender of all 'hope'!" Applause for this 'penning!' |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Thank you, Linda, it was a rainy day on Sunday and I was in a "thoughtful" mood.  And yes, E's comment was cute. Kacy, a "smile-piece" was needed. Thank you. Sue, "It would be nice to find someone there in each of our tomorrows, wouldn't it.". I agree but friendships are just as nice and important.Lori, have missed you and am glad to see you posting again. You are thought of often. suthern,Thank you. Hope your world has settled down. Wishing you a happier year. Bill, well any attire would do for you Just bring that guitar and your voice, too.Bruce,"the worst 'death' is likely the surrender of all 'hope'!" ...I agree even if some days the hope wanes a bit. Thanks all! M |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
That is one cute poem Maureen So much enjoyed. A big hug my friend. Lindsay |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Thank you, Lindsay for stopping by. M |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed this write of thoughts Maureen! ~ Beautifully penned on this page of blue... ARCTIC WIND |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
"You, there" says it all and it can be just the most comforting thought for our melancholic rainy days. This is extremely captivating, dear Maureen. Love, Margherita |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Artic Wind, thank you. Nice to see you again! Margherita, Thank you. These in between winter and spring days sometimes require comforting thoughts. M |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Thank you, M... It's a lot better. *S* I'm still a bit lost... and shudder to think hurricane season is approaching once again... but live goes on and I march along... even if I never quite get the rhythm. *S* {{{{{HUGS}}}}} |
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