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vandana
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0 posted 2009-03-16 05:56 PM





Yet

Yet why
Yet why are we still here?
Moonshine at the shore
Yet
We stood saying words forever
Yet I can feel your love
Yet why are we here?
Yet
I can feel our heartbeat fast
I don't know
Why I keep looking back at past
Yet so far
So far to home
I want our love grow fast
Yet why I have to?
So many songs
Written in a book
for awhile
Yet it will be long day
To find my heart to home
Yet I can see so much

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Earth Angel
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1 posted 2009-03-16 06:10 PM


"Yet it will be long day
To find my heart to home
Yet I can see so much"

~ Home is where the heart is!
~ and yes, you can see, feel, and express "so much"!

Lovely write!


Linda

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2 posted 2009-03-16 06:38 PM


This overflows with deep heart-beat feelings, Vandana.
ethome
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3 posted 2009-03-16 06:39 PM


Ah, vandana you can see the love and the results that should be.
A very touching poem.
Great title.

Eric

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4 posted 2009-03-16 07:10 PM


"We stood saying words forever
Yet I can feel your love
Yet why are we here?"

very much enjoyed

Robert E. Jordan
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5 posted 2009-03-16 10:04 PM


Yo dear Vandana,

These are good words.  It's always good to see and feel many things.  That's enriching.

Love Bobby

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6 posted 2009-03-17 10:55 AM


Why I keep looking back at past
Yet so far
So far to home
I want our love grow fast

Touching and poignant... enjoyed this! *S*

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