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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Yet Yet why Yet why are we still here? Moonshine at the shore Yet We stood saying words forever Yet I can feel your love Yet why are we here? Yet I can feel our heartbeat fast I don't know Why I keep looking back at past Yet so far So far to home I want our love grow fast Yet why I have to? So many songs Written in a book for awhile Yet it will be long day To find my heart to home Yet I can see so much |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"Yet it will be long day To find my heart to home Yet I can see so much" ~ Home is where the heart is! ~ and yes, you can see, feel, and express "so much"!  Lovely write!  Linda |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
This overflows with deep heart-beat feelings, Vandana.  |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Ah, vandana you can see the love and the results that should be. A very touching poem. Great title. Eric |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"We stood saying words forever Yet I can feel your love Yet why are we here?" very much enjoyed  |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo dear Vandana, These are good words. It's always good to see and feel many things. That's enriching. Love Bobby |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Why I keep looking back at past Yet so far So far to home I want our love grow fast Touching and poignant... enjoyed this! *S* |
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