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Open Poetry #44

Moon

Shadow_Singer
Member

since 2007-10-24

Posts 51

0 posted 2009-03-16 06:31 AM

I float in my boat in mist and moonlight
I wish you were here to share this night
We could make new memories till dawns light
Yet
You are elsewhere with another someone
And will wake not alone to a new sun
Our love was once is now undone
Still
I wish you could share this moon

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

1 posted 2009-03-16 06:39 AM

Very poignant longing. The moon can do that to your heart.

Raindance
Member

since 2009-02-07

Posts 120
West Coast

2 posted 2009-03-16 08:32 AM

I could really feel the missing you in this...

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

3 posted 2009-03-16 09:32 AM

~ the yearning, the longing ~ the remembering... The moon has that kind of power over us.

Well-expressed!

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

4 posted 2009-03-16 10:54 AM

Sadly beautiful.

Love,
Margherita

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

5 posted 2009-03-16 12:38 PM

I've known this longing and you write it well. *S*

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

6 posted 2009-03-16 01:33 PM

Shadow_Singer - I sense the longing from your words...

BC

Shadow_Singer
Member

since 2007-10-24

Posts 51

7 posted 2009-03-16 04:28 PM

Thank you all kindly for the responses

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