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when the whale belches
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when the whale belches |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
When belches the whale, a real typhoon comes down on the plankton, sardines clear off, poor small animals, when belches the whale shrimps have bad breath, and the ocean makes bubbles which rise up to the sky … |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
I wrote this poem with childish mood five years ago, I guess children would like it. yann |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
I like it - though many would say that I am not a good judge because I am so childish. I love the shrimp's bad breath. This is whimsical and wonderful, yann. A |
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Marc-Andre Senior Member
since 2008-12-07
Posts 501 |
Yann, this is a funny and endearing piece, and yep, I'm sure children ( young and old ), would love it  Mark |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
 Oh, Yann, I love the child in you! This is just so cute! Enjoyed greatly! Love, Margherita |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
2islander2 - I can only imagine what a whales belch would sound like, yikes... BC |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Hmmmm, something about the air bubbles, don't get me started! plop plop, fizz fizz! |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo Yann, Could that whale possibly be induced to vomit up some ambergris? Of course ambergris is money in the bank. Tell that whale that mere belching just won't do. Bobby |
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