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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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I could feel your eyes there at my soul window when you read of my dreams with your fingers so you could feel more then just see them that dry mouth smile that surprised you while you were swallowing caution slowly trying to keep it down this time and how your foot dangled as if someone else was in your body using the woman of you to express her own art of wanting you said you loved how I spoke of the rain like it was the person you really were but it seemed I knew that before you did so would I help you now, to find your oceans ______________ daark (viscosity) |
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Chalmette Guy Senior Member
since 2009-03-11
Posts 1257Louisiana |
What can I say? Your style is utterly unique and perfect. I loved the title too. You are always a breath of fresh air Dark. |
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pretty1 Junior Member
since 2009-03-13
Posts 22 |
it's absolutely beautiful! |
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Raindance Member
since 2009-02-07
Posts 120West Coast |
This is the moment I love: "you said you loved how I spoke of the rain like it was the person you really were but it seemed I knew that before you did" that moment, just before... |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Ch Guy..thanks so much guy!! _________________ Pretty1, thank you, was wondering when you would stop by. __________________ Raindance...thank you for whispering. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
A new series! Very interesting ... and "capistrano", well that fits you certainly  .No one speaks of oceans like you. Very captivating. Love, Margherita |
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Indigo Senior Member
since 2001-05-17
Posts 602 |
internal friction that resistance to flow when words rub her heart raw. Indigo |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms mar, thanks lady friend... ____________ ms indi... when the leather wears against the skin will a whisperer heal it or will it take the balm of a lover..thanks babe |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
you said you loved how I spoke of the rain like it was the person you really were but it seemed I knew that before you did so would I help you now, to find your oceans Methinks I'm going to enjoy this series very much. *S* Excellent write! |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
thanks ms suthern...you smile me |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
D, Caution is so hard to swallow unless it is cut into bite-sized pieces. A |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
You are like a walk at low tide, the sun and sand glitter in just the right light and the shoreline is an endless moment in time. and all that! |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms ali-san, thank you for the bite sized moments babe ________________ ms bluezy, that was you I saw walking there then? Thanks lady! |
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