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Open Poetry #44

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Chalmette Guy
Senior Member

since 2009-03-11

Posts 1257
Louisiana

0 posted 2009-03-12 04:16 PM

One body
One soul
To share in the transfer
To become whole
One offers all
For consumption
If prematurely interrupted
Love brings the resumption
Two chemicals combine
To become something unique
After one feeds on the other
Becoming spent and weak
You learn to offer up
That it’s never too late
To be lost within each other
And to transubstantiate
I give you all
You won’t have to wait
Open mouths to share
Your needs to sate

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

1 posted 2009-03-12 05:25 PM

Hi Guy. Thanks for the generous poem and the beautiful sentiments you share. LOve in so complex but so necessary for living. a very enjoyable read.

yann

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

2 posted 2009-03-12 06:57 PM

Welcome to these passionate blue pages. This is an enjoyable read, thank you for sharing!

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

3 posted 2009-03-12 07:32 PM

"I give you all
You won’t have to wait"

now those are words I love to hear!

very nice

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

4 posted 2009-03-14 09:12 PM

You learn to offer up
That it’s never too late
To be lost within each other

I love this entire beautiful poem... but especially the hope embedded in these words. *S* Fantasic penning!!

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