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Chalmette Guy
Senior Member

since 2009-03-11

Posts 1257
Louisiana

0 posted 2009-03-12 08:52 AM

You hold back your thoughts the way you do your desires
In the deepest vault of your subconscious you deny the fire
Locked away and forgotten in hopes that it will go away
But you know, it only grows stronger every day
A force that for now you are under the delusion of control
An entity that reflects the depths of your mortal soul
But soon, the pressure becomes all too much
To be released in sight, sound, taste and touch
Tell me of these secrets you try so hard to restrain
The darkest bottomless thoughts your dreams contain
Everyone has a shadowy corner within themselves
I want to know what pleasures these thoughts could tell
What wonders exist where all that is left is you
When laid bare the darkest secrets of all you want to do

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

1 posted 2009-03-12 11:44 AM

Oh, my! With a passionate, loving man such as yourself, dear Poet, she will surely disclose those secrets ~ and wanton desires! ~ to you.

Enjoy the unfolding of her treasures! You will be worthy of them, to be sure!

EA

Chalmette Guy
Senior Member

since 2009-03-11

Posts 1257
Louisiana

2 posted 2009-03-12 11:47 AM

I am always all ears to the disclosure of those secrets.

Thanks EA.

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

3 posted 2009-03-12 07:29 PM

hey those are posted in Mature silly

lol

awesome...

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

4 posted 2009-03-14 09:04 PM

Tell me of these secrets you try so hard to restrain
The darkest bottomless thoughts your dreams contain

I don't see how anyone with blood running through their veins could resist such a sensual plea. *S* Absolutely beautiful!!

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

5 posted 2009-03-14 09:34 PM

This is rather mysterious, beautiful, dark and dreamy.

Enjoyed your poem very much!

stacylynn418
Junior Member

since 2009-03-06

Posts 40
new york

6 posted 2009-03-14 09:38 PM

i really enjoyed reading this. you can really feel the longing to know the deepest darkest parts of someones mind.
well written

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