Open Poetry #44 |
Matching Lady Boots |
serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
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She is olives in my mouth. Ripened and brown purpling, a kick of the tip boot to south my sins before me, hurdling in these rhythms of the run one and two and three I'll stretch and pray my foot won't catch me down under thumb or under crown-- she's olives in my mouth ripened, with dark good looks and laughter's sun washing over me in waves... the ocean's tides? they rise both ways and that is love, incredible devotion to the surf and foam: Awash and glistening, atoned in the dawn of not alone and feeling very brave. She is olives in my mouth bursting juice of ripening as the lace cradles my face-- I'm laughing, at my loneliness and grinning at my grave. |
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SEA
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I can't begin to pick a favorite line, they are all so good... but? who is she? is she, death? sorry, I'm slow sometimes |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
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This one is for Dark Angel. (usually? I don't tell, but I want m'lady back.) oh just do a search on her sue-sea. She is..grin..ripe olives in my mouth. |
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SEA
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since 2000-01-18
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are you kidding? I loved her, I wish she would come back too! she rocks my socks. like you!! |
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turtle Senior Member
since 2009-01-23
Posts 548Harbor |
Hi Blaze, I don't know.....sounds like ludes to me. OOOOO! The colors. (chuckle) turtle |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
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aw..you! Thanks for keeping me company too. yer a doll, yanno? |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
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Oh gawd turtle--you sure know how to ruin a mood. Even when ludes were ludes? They were a combo press of angel dust and oh no... Not giving out recipes! *chuckle* So tell me? Are you like, a sea turtle? (*winks* to sea--or are you a tarapin?) |
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SEA
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my dog is like a turtle...he snaps...like *right there* at your face...so so close LOL |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
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smile um...I dunno. Matching Lady Boots Italy, Louisiana? nod lame, I know but *shrug* OH..LAME BOOTS..oh spare me from myself! |
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SEA
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since 2000-01-18
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I thought she was, down under? boots, hey! I get it! That is really cool |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
Lovely -Juju |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
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smile thank you Juju... and you'd look fantastic in lame' boots--hmmm..thigh highs, I'd say, with like a suede skort and maybe a fringee shawl? niceeeeeeeeeeee (I dress people in thrift stores.) tight hugs lovie, |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Is Louisianna the shape of a boot? yur beautiful you know that right! smmile so i'm olives in yur mouth, ripened and purpling? mmmm my taste buds are going wild. *grins* Thank you M'lady. This really is beautiful. i'm smiling wide. kisses for you. m xx |
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Chalmette Guy Senior Member
since 2009-03-11
Posts 1257Louisiana |
"and grinning at my grave." Awesome as usual. Your talent is immense, you know I always thought that. I am not back "home". There is no more. What is rebuilding back there is a new thing. Hard to describe. That is a topic for another day. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
PK/CG...so much will never be the same, that's true enough. But St. Bernard has produced a people that are such a unique blend of strength and heart. I know you know. Now excuse me while I pull the curtain closed-- Mah Maree! more luscious than ever m'ladylove. Thank you for being such beautiful inspiration. (and I can do tricks with olives, yanno) *winks* and laughter I love you. MUAH |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
A beautiful tribute to/from a beautiful lady. *S* But those last 2 lines?? *S* Awww, lady... that's my life. *S* |
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