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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2009-03-11 07:35 PM


Don Tiki Adulterated

Treat yourself to a tropical paradise tonight.
Buy a Don Tiki CD, turn it on nice and loud,
and then close your eyes real tight.

Listen to those Tiki drums and get into the beat.
Feel the intensity as the drums turn up the heat.
Relax and enjoy the songs and the music,
a well deserved island treat.

Can you picture yourself on a tropical island,
Can you see the swaying coconuts trees?
Listen for the rhythm of the waves,
enjoy the soothing ocean breeze.

Slice up some pineapples,
imagining you're in an island hut
enjoy a few strawberry margheritas
while your sweetheart breaks
open some fresh coconuts.

To top off a perfect evening,
make sure the door is tightly shut,
so you and your honey can make
sweet love in your cozy island hut.

JamesLee
11March
2009



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1 posted 2009-03-11 07:47 PM


I love drums

nice one James

ethome
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2 posted 2009-03-11 08:47 PM


Sounds perfect.

Where do I sign up?

Is this a special club?

You lucky stiff James living down there in paradise.

Very enjoyable read.

Eric

LindsayP
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3 posted 2009-03-11 09:07 PM



Can you picture yourself on a tropical island,
Can you see the swaying coconuts trees?
Listen for the rhythm of the waves,
enjoy the soothing ocean breeze.

Sounds very romantic James,
makes me wish I was there.

Lindsay

Noel
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since 2009-03-06
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West Coast
4 posted 2009-03-11 10:20 PM


I can picture it, espeically with one of those little paper umbrellas in my tropical breeze.  

Enjoyed the view here.

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5 posted 2009-03-14 08:25 PM


Can you picture yourself on a tropical island,
Can you see the swaying coconuts trees?
Listen for the rhythm of the waves,
enjoy the soothing ocean breeze.

I can... and i am. *S* Beautiful work, James!

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