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Accept My Demands
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Accept My Demands |
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A Beautiful Disaster Member
since 2007-01-13
Posts 409 |
These months were a battle Of love and my pride, Pride chose to surrender, But I didn't mind. I sang my own ballad Along to your chords, You failed as my shield, I kept being your sword. You asked for the world - I could give you much more. True life was somewhere Behind the locked door. Through all your nightmares I kept holding your hand. I drained my own sea For your castle of sand. Love made me its slave - It's my porcelain strength. Now beg for forgiveness, Accept my demands! You're charming, unique, And your look is brand-new. Your face in the mirror Is one love for you. One slut cost you more Than the tears I shed, And seeing you two Made me feel just regret. Now beg for forgiveness, Feel guilty and pray! Remember those months And the last summer day. I tried to be perfect, I was at my best, You turned all my life To a terrible mess! Love made me its slave - It's my porcelain strength. Now beg for forgiveness, Accept my demands! Accept my demands! |
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SlowlyFallAway Member
since 2008-08-29
Posts 279North Carolina |
"You failed as my shield, I kept being your sword" No way... I fell in love with this line... Powerful stuff. The whole poem was. But this line.. whew. |
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Chalmette Guy Senior Member
since 2009-03-11
Posts 1257Louisiana |
I agree. That line was powerful and I loved the imagery. |
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