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circle of palms |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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you were a little girl again in your eyes, I heard the songs that you sang to daydreams often with your windows down on freeways wearing endless summers on purpose and pressing words to your mind like the imprints of butterflies when they fly over lovers making shadows on their skin tattoos of shimmering that lingers we would always be strangers like the sky and the ocean except at their evening's edges but our blues and grays in parking lots would be momentary smiles parked beside and across from nearly the same direction just a hinted distance from circled palms _________________ daark |
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WTBAKELAR
since 2008-09-09
Posts 1089Utah, USA |
As always, Dark, Sure like your stuff. I read it and picture in my minds eye what you write. Cool. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
WT..Thanks for the mind's eye replays!! |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
I love your shadow play and how you flutter my skin beieving you are here |
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viking_metal Senior Member
since 2007-02-02
Posts 1337In a Jeep, Minnesota. |
Very good. I felt peaceful. -P Some people fall in love and touch the sky, some people fall in love and find quicksand. |
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Indigo Senior Member
since 2001-05-17
Posts 602 |
it is the edges melding in blurred abandon that makes the sunset. Indigo |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Ah yes, "in your eyes I heard the songs". Connection however distant is still a mystery wonderful... Eric |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms inki...thanks babe, you always bring a special something ______________ vm, thanks for the read and comment ______________ ethome, thank you for the read _________________ ms indi..thank you for looking over the brim and grinning |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
"wearing endless summers on purpose" "like the imprints of butterflies" "tattoos of shimmering that lingers" "momentary smiles parked beside" ...thank you for sharing these lines from your reservoir of the remarkable...excellent |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
D Sometimes, I feel like I have this big book on my lap that I am poring over. It has wonderful illustrations and beautiful music comes from the pages - and the story mesmerizes me. You write the book. Thank you. Ali-san |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
yes, I do like this Mr Daark   RDBBe kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
steavenr...thanks amigo ______________ ali-san, thanks little one _________________ ms r&b...thank you lady friend |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Winter seems less cold when you perceive and speak of endless summers and butterflies. This "circle of palms" exercises that certain irresistible magnetic power which is a characteristic of your master pen. Love, Margherita |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms mar...it is an endless summer slice of the sky where there is always a residue of a smile it seems, thanks ms |
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