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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597
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I just sit . . . in this dark . . . and wait . . . until dawn there is no one here . . . not even me |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
... but here I am reading you and thus you ARE. Gosh, dear Krawdad, your words really convey a state of being we sometimes experience. Kind of being out of ourselves. Nights can be quite long! Good morning Krawdad! Love, Margherita  |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
This speaks volumes. Understood. Ida |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
loneliness is the precursor to expectation |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
I felt every non-breath of your poem, Krawdad. I have felt like that before too, but in my case, it has been fear (brought on by crimes that I have been victim to), especially when the electricity goes off in a storm, or load-shedding. Owl |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Been there. Done that. However, I doubt that I could have ever have shared that as intimately, effectively ~ and as succinctly ~ as you have just done. Giving you a warm, understanding hug, EA  |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
You know - I felt this way lately myself. Almost invisible. Well done sir. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Almost every night I'm awake at 2-3AM, sitting in the dark 'meditating' the moment. This is when my spirit sometimes floats away into space, leaving me like an empty seashell. You've captured that moment well, poet Krawdad. |
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