Open Poetry #44 |
Nemesis. |
Windhover Member
since 2003-11-17
Posts 179UK |
A thousand poets spun a dream that lasted for a thousand years, then you were born, at last, my love... and thus, were all their hopes fulfilled. I dreamed with them, so long ago... and, in my dream, your face was clear, then, you were gone... like morning dew; my peace of mind abandoned me. Now, like the spring... you come again; alas, you are too late, my love. For, though the memory lingers still... I have forgotten how to dream. Exquisitely, I burn for you... but, nothing can this hurt allay, for I am chained, and you are free... the Nemesis of a misty dream. |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
I love the feel to this...the last stanza is excellent...I love how it reiterates the problem while offering a 'resolution'...the last line is tops |
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