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Suncleaver Member
since 2009-01-18
Posts 481Stafford England 
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Lay softly beside me with breathless sighs Our aftermath, ecstatic cries, Shadow sun spins over our entwinement Love's tryst over your confinement. Taste my blood and so drink of ecstasy Eros' wine, swallow and be free, Call my name, I'll be forever bound here For you, your flesh I will now sear. Shapeless dust of us in our lust drenched bed, Shameless lust, heed the words I've said: The shadow sun blesses our lustful days Of deeds done under ebon rays. Yeah, I know it's a bit dark, but I couldn't quite justify a place in the dark forums. Better that my friends in open get to know a darker side of me, or at least that's what I think. Never sigh for a better world, it's already composed, played and told. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Suncleaver - no need to post this on the dark side, I rather like it here... BC |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I enjoy writing "Dark" poetry once in awhile, myself! It's rather cathartic! lol I can't always be sunshine and lollipops! lol  Into every life some lust must fall ~ or is that "dust"?!?  Your pen dripped some mighty impassioned red ink! It is such a pleasure to be reading your poetry again! Warm hug, Linda  |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
I like that, good choice of words. Thanks for the lines. yann |
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