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Open Poetry #44

Spring’s Awakening (#2)

secondhanddreampoet
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since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

0 posted 2009-03-07 08:00 PM

  Spring’s Awakening (#2)

Under the last sharp moon
of cold Winter wisdom,
a subtle-whisper wind
heralds enlightenment
  to come,
with the first gentle dawn
that unwraps the darkness
around the dazzling web
  of life,
and snow-white clouds
brushed light...
upon a cobalt sky
of Spring’s awakening.

       --- b. e. adams (3/7/2009)

Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

1 posted 2009-03-07 08:28 PM

Yo Secondhanddreampoet,

This is very nice. Spring is right around the corner.

Bobby

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

2 posted 2009-03-07 08:42 PM

I love the way you write these....Like the positive approach....(smile)...

Write on Bruce.

Eric

pontyjim
Junior Member

since 2009-03-06

Posts 40
Ontario, Canada

3 posted 2009-03-07 09:08 PM

I love pastoral poetry when done well, and it was done well here. kudos.

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

4 posted 2009-03-08 03:29 AM

Always done well.
Ida

Noel
Junior Member

since 2009-03-06

Posts 42
West Coast

5 posted 2009-03-08 09:21 PM

Such a breathtaking view !!

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

6 posted 2009-03-09 04:27 PM

secondhanddreampoet - bring spring here quickly, the white of winter is getting rather old...

BC

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