Open Poetry #44 |
Bones and Winter Kill |
Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
It’s a way cold and snowy night. Little Bones is walking home from a trick. He’s walking through an alley. Bones notices a lump of something lying on the side. Bones is curious. He walks over, and notices that it’s a man lying there. He shakes the man, but gets no response. The man appears stiff. Bones runs home, and tells Mom. Mom tells Bones not to worry about it. “It’s cold, and people freeze to death. He’ll be found.” Bones thinks to himself. “Someday that might be me.” Bobby |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Oh, my God! This is my very favorite of yours, dear Bobby! "Someday that might be me!". Yes. And still these killing cold winter nights are the final stations for so many. And it does not happen only in Philadelphia. Even in Rome, where the cold nights aren't so many! But the poor are often surprised by rigid weather ... Love and thank you for this. Margherita |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Bones remains a realist and gains wisdom from his harsh experiences. Still, his heart showed up and he wanted to reach out and help. The precious sides of Bones. Eric |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
It could be any of us. There but for fortune... Ida |
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zaxby Junior Member
since 2009-03-05
Posts 48California |
powerful read I wrote something similar, which I'll post sometime, but this poem is very true and well done. Who's bones? |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks dear Margherita, I'm very pleased this poem worked for you. You know Bones knows, and has the word. Love Bobby |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks Eric, For your kind words on Bones. Bones is always willing to help, even when there's no money in it. Bobby |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks dear Ida, You've got the word Hon, straight from Bones. Love Bobby |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks Zaxby, Bones is my alter ego. He's a young male prostitute. I'm pleased the poem worked for you. Bobby |
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