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pink boa |
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tao power Member
since 2009-02-24
Posts 109 |
The shower hisses and mists hot as the heart of the tropics and she slithers from her bedclothes to slough off last night's skin. I recall how, in the passionate hour she coiled and recoiled and her bottom jaw unhinged. At first I found it sexy, and she shook her rattle well, but in the morning light I find deep in the center of milky blue eyes the cold blooded love of a reptile. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
"ssssssssssssssssssssssssss" alright too.  Maybe I passed it on just in time...  |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
You know what it says in the good book.....As bitter as wormwood......Can't leave ya alone can I? I'm just having some fun. This is an superb metaphorical render of the morning after. Take care Eric |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
lol very nicely done  |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Yanno, I really liked this. You have a way. "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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viking_metal Senior Member
since 2007-02-02
Posts 1337In a Jeep, Minnesota. |
Very nicely done. Truly Impressed. -P Some people fall in love and touch the sky, some people fall in love and find quicksand. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
The alliteration in this resounds well. Good job, Tao, and thanks for taking time to read some of my writing. |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
I like this one too. I am going to have to catch up and read the rest of the poesm you have posted. So far - I am in like. Alison |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
wow...from elephant to boa...and, still remaining pink...pondering...nicely done |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Interesting...I like it. Ida |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
 <--thar ain't no smilie with a pink feather boa--yet. touche'? |
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