Open Poetry #44 |
brim of deepen |
Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
my eyes love your skin sigh places but more the under side of them where you moan from some mornings when your soul wants to know a man when the woman of you is restless and leaves the lady side behind when she feels it is ok to need more than just the window's brim reflection when she wants the sun to touch her eyes to warm the love words on her lips when just another morning momentary is not enough for her deeper healing my eyes love your skin sigh places but more the under side of them where you moan from some evenings when your soul wants to know a man well enough for your deeper healing _________________ daark (forbidden) |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I would love to have a book of you |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
"when she wants the sun to touch her eyes to warm the love words on her lips when just another morning momentary is not enough for her deeper healing" my favorite lines~~ looking forward to the sun wants M |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms Dixie..I would be proud to be a book for you, thanks lady!! _________________ ms MMs, thanks babe for letting some of your sunshine bless my words here. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
The muse of this "forbidden" series continues to inspire you so beautifully, that "forbidden" becomes most desirable. I love how you weave the soul into these extremely captivating verses. Yes, a book of your poetry is highly due, I agree with Dixie! Love, Margherita |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
The book on you is that people would like to have a book of you. You should book that idea. Sensuously masterfully written piece here. Eric |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms mar...thanks babe...perhaps someday a book will fall from this tree.. ______________ eric, thanks amigo |
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