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Open Poetry #44
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norunnin
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since 2008-10-16
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0 posted 2009-03-04 12:35 PM


i bleed and i stay awake
theres somethin i can no longer fake
and i cant wait for the weight
to fall of my shoulder

now im older im colder
long since been crushed by a boulder
i bleed and i smolder

now older now bolder
gonna push off that boulder
and this is what i told her
i said HEY
get the **** up off my shoulder NOW
HEY to you im never gonna bow
and i dont need NO ONE to show me how
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tao power
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since 2009-02-24
Posts 109
1 posted 2009-03-04 01:21 AM

yeah!  you tell her!  GET OFF MY SHOULDER, BOULDER!  

this poem was funny.  was it supposed to be?
norunnin
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since 2008-10-16
Posts 71
2 posted 2009-03-04 01:54 AM

it is what you want it to be
Pilgrimage
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since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945
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3 posted 2009-03-04 05:02 PM

do it.  Love the continuous rhyming in this one.  

Nan (Pilgrim variety)
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