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touching eden, shunning heaven
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touching eden, shunning heaven |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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I know you will look here again today through the windows of your wings to see if there are heartbeasts or heartbeats on this glass sighed soul you will wonder of my breath at your lips and how my hands would feed your warm as you filled them to gluttony with your vixen's pastry and whiskey and then you will put the proper on again not so neatly pleated this time but still well buttoned and poise ended just enough to stir the shadow's master and whet keen his most rigid protrusions that would willingly impale your single rose upon the liquor of a thousand storms and even the god eyes would know our sins of the daylight, touching eden, shunning heaven ________________ daark (forbidden) |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"you will wonder of my breath at your lips and how my hands would feed your warm as you filled them to gluttony"  loved this...a lot. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Since carnival, I've been brushing up on my mythology. I can't remember what all I forgot, but your title reminded me of a fun fact in Greek Mythology-- Did you know Uranus is Heaven?  I suspect you suspected so, if you weren't sure...*laughing* Love you, lovie!  You have mad skills. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"I know you will look here again today through the windows of your wings" ~ Oh, oh! You caught me!  |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms suesea, thanks babe _______________ ms serene...shhhhh I don't think we can discuss such personal things here can we? hehe ______________ ms ea...thanks for looking in lady!! |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
BEAU TI FUL ARCTIC WIND |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
AW, humble thanks!! |
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Raindance Member
since 2009-02-07
Posts 120West Coast |
I found myself in a breathless space somewhere between looking through the windows of the wings and stirring the shadow's master. I think I got left fluttering there... |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
raindance...captured is not always bad..as long as you can still feel the winds, thank you |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I know you will look here again today through the windows of your wings to see if there are heartbeasts or heartbeats on this glass sighed soul Pure perfection. *S* |
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Indigo Senior Member
since 2001-05-17
Posts 602 |
pleated school girl plaid when draped across her knowing brings cloakroom surprise. Indigo |
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nebulous_nymph Junior Member
since 2008-03-02
Posts 37Inertia |
blushing..... for no apparent reason..... |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Eden sounds perfect for such passion! Heaven can wait! Your talent forges sublime sensations. Love, Margherita |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms suthern, thanks lady!! ____________ ms indi, detention is required and my white ropes have your name on them, thanks babe _________________ ms nymph, I do love your blush colors, thanks babe ________________ ms mar, thank you lady friend. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Oh devil you. When will you ever learn? I'd like to place an order for one case each of vixen's pastry and whiskey. Send it FED EX and I'll pay the charges. Then maybe I can act like you do in the last verse...... Masterful wordsmithing once again. Eric |
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