Open Poetry #44 |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast ![]() |
it was in the dreams of the boy man before his sinews became ink and leather before the highway became his shield and the dawn his only adversary she was an ocean, that woman of night eyes with the shimmering of skin and sounds that were from her soul's depth and her love was the undulating tide her breasts were the sierras in spring jutting heavenly into sky mind sighs jaunty was her sway as she seduced the clouds and tempted to arousal even the mind of god she was the dunes of death valley summer her shifting thighs a dancer in verve the writhing of a gypsy was her wind music the damp of her crying a swelter's kiss but when the man boy was awakened by but a whisper from her smile's brim and her eyes brought lotion to his scars without the dreams could he know her charms that because of love had yearned him blind _______________ daark (forbidden) |
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Member Seraphic
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Posts 22676with you |
*sighs* this is beautiful D ![]() |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms suesea..thanks babe!! |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
We often see what the heart the heart wants us to see. Enjoyed much sir. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
thanks so much Mark.. |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Now this is a beauty~ ![]() ARCTIC WIND |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
thanks AW!! |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: Outstanding, dear D.! Love, Margherita ![]() |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms mar...thanks so much lady friend |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
wow!!! fabulous write...last line is a stunner |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Just wonderful Mr Daark! Be well RDB xx Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
steavenr, humble thanks amigo ___________ ms r&b..thanks lady |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
"that because of love had yearned him blind" Now that's a classic line. Great work Dark you draw so well. Eric |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
eric..thanks guy |
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since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
quote: Oh man, D, you word-wrapped around my heart with this one. This is sheer beauty. A |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms ali-san, it is always a pleasure to wordwrap your mind..thanks babe |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
had to re-visit this one...loved this on the second go-around: " love had yearned him blind" |
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