»
Archives
»
Open Poetry #44
»
Swans
| Open Poetry #44 |
|
Swans |
|
|
Sheree New Member
since 2009-03-01
Posts 6Xanadu |
OH SNAP How long did that take Silly avion drinks the water Seven seven ate swan singing swan Ink blot test now How is that? What is this? Ebony ravens trill playfully How many more Count the ravens Singing catfish trills the time Three more minutes --It is not dementia Sings the catfish Ten now Space space space Seven to go Now copy paste Control - A, C, V Cut, not copy Catfish dances |
||
| © Copyright 2009 Sheree - All Rights Reserved | |||
|
Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
From the beginning, I know which shows you watch. That's good; we have a lot in common. Welcome to Passions! Please, check your email for a Very Special Welcome! " It matters not this distance now " Excerpt, Yesterday's Love |
||
|
Sheree New Member
since 2009-03-01
Posts 6Xanadu |
Hi, thank you. But, I am not sure what shows you mean? I only watch MADtv and sometimes Craig Ferguson. Thank you for the warm welcome.  |
||
|
Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
There's a show on called "House"...about a doctor...who sometimes just says, "Snap!"  If you get online with Hulu, you can pick up some of his shows. |
||
|
Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Hi, Sheree! Welcome aboard the pip ship! This certainly was a fun poem. ~ a singing swan, trilling ravens, and a dancing catfish! ~ What's not to like!  Giving you a warm, welcoming pip hug, Earth Angel  |
||
|
Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Much enjoyed this piece and it's challenge of the mind. Sort of brought to mind when I get handed a Mensa test to be evaluated. I was wondering if the spelling of avion was intentional or if it was meant to be avian. Welcome to PIP and I look forward to reading more of your works. |
||
Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
A delightful write! Welcome to Pips. As a bird lover, I was drawn to the title, and then had fun reading. |
||
|
Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Welcome to Pips.  It looks like the SW posted a double reply. Anyway, I really did enjoy this first offering. [This message has been edited by Midnitesun (03-03-2009 07:23 AM).] |
||
|
turtle Senior Member
since 2009-01-23
Posts 548Harbor |
This is so sweet.... and crazy....I love it! Are you writing a poem about writing a poem,or resume.... ? Quote: ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ "Seven seven ate swan singing swan" ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Do you mean "ate swan" or "eight swam"? I like this Sheree, welcome to PIP. |
||
|
tao power Member
since 2009-02-24
Posts 109 |
this poem was like a manic state of schizophrenia, but in a disconcerting, disjointed way the madness sort of made sense. Intentional or not, it made it worth reading. |
||
|
Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
WELCOME TO PIP!!! ARCTIC WIND |
||
|
Sheree New Member
since 2009-03-01
Posts 6Xanadu |
Thanks, all. That's funny, actually, because I'm schizophrenic. |
||
|
|
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
|
| All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. | ||
