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Anniepimm
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since 2008-12-26

Posts 550
England

0 posted 2009-01-04 05:21 AM

Love The First Time

As we meet in love tonight;
Sweetest harmony will be ours,
Ever faithful to one another,
As we pass these happy hours,

Our hearts as one are so pure,
And white as driven snow,
The more we think of each other,
The more our love will grow,

In purity of mind,
In his heart there is me,
Turn your thoughts into love,
when he talks in accents sweet,

Feathered wings bring my favourite hour
With a rising event of life, It is now clear,
The seed of life is now planted,
Each blessing to my lips is more dear,

Annie,
10-8-2008

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

1 posted 2009-01-04 05:30 AM

Annie.. I think this may be the first post I have read of yours.. wonderfully expressed.. delighted to have you on our pages blue..

I will go find some more of yours to read and enjoy..

RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Richy
Member Elite

since 2003-05-03

Posts 3050

2 posted 2009-01-04 11:03 AM

Dear poetess, here's hoping that every time,
will be like, the first.

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

3 posted 2009-01-04 12:01 PM

Ain't love grand!?! May yours always be as fresh and sweet as the first day of spring!

A lovely write.

EA

Anniepimm
Senior Member

since 2008-12-26

Posts 550
England

4 posted 2009-01-04 12:43 PM

Awww thank you, even though my first time was 36 years ago i still remember
Isn't it funny the things you remember...

Annie

steavenr
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since 2003-11-17

Posts 4058

5 posted 2009-01-04 11:26 PM

"The more we think of each other,
The more our love will grow"

...nice line that brings a peace-filled smile...it is so true

Anniepimm
Senior Member

since 2008-12-26

Posts 550
England

6 posted 2009-01-05 07:06 AM

Thank you

nourzihane
Member

since 2008-07-10

Posts 254
Algeria

7 posted 2009-01-07 05:56 AM

My Dear Anniepimm

******************
Our hearts as one are so pure,
And white as driven snow,
The more we think of each other,
The more our love will grow,
******************
distinguished topic thanks a lot about this topic i like it too much

Accept my pass

Nourzihane

Anniepimm
Senior Member

since 2008-12-26

Posts 550
England

8 posted 2009-01-07 07:19 AM

Thank you Nourzihane that is a lovely response to my poem
Bless you...

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

9 posted 2009-01-07 06:19 PM

A pleasure to read...James

Anniepimm
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since 2008-12-26

Posts 550
England

10 posted 2009-01-07 07:39 PM

Thank you James

ethome
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since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

11 posted 2009-01-08 02:08 AM

Delightful loving expressions Annie....This flows really nicely for the reader.

Thanks for the positive thoughts.

Eric

Nikki Thorman
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since 2009-01-08

Posts 7
South Australia

12 posted 2009-01-08 03:53 AM

Anniepimm, I thought that your peom is really beautiful.I look forward to reading your next one.... don't leave me waiting in suspence for to long take care xx

Anniepimm
Senior Member

since 2008-12-26

Posts 550
England

13 posted 2009-01-08 04:08 PM

Thank you both
I promise i wont leave it to long and welcome to pips

[This message has been edited by Anniepimm (01-08-2009 04:51 PM).]

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