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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! 
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biding Spring Here in this grand forest realm, of earth, sky, and water in deep, intimate ‘one’, a misty-island moon arrives (mid ancient apparitions and time-shifting shadows) on a snow-blended Winter wind, voicing its antipathic challenge to any foretaste of Spring. --- b. e. adams (2/27/2009) |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
BRRR! Chill Winter winds blow outside, fending off the struggling Spring, matching this poem perfectly. |
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gilead Senior Member
since 2008-03-10
Posts 1067nevada, USA |
You take the reader into the here and there of the poem, a most enjoyable experience. art |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo Secondhanddreampoet, Spring is coming, nothing can stop it. Bobby |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Yes, yes, please come spring. Great words to put on call.....Write on! Eric |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice  |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Patience may be one of the Virtues, but I am becoming less virtuos with "the Winter wind, voicing its antipathic challenge to any foretaste of Spring."  Linda |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
when I look out my window into this land of nothingness, I know I can come here and see beauty through your writings thank you |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
BEAUTIFUL imagery there SHDP! Always a pleasure to read ARCTIC WIND |
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WindWalker Senior Member
since 2001-10-12
Posts 1218 |
Your words always take me on an amazing journey. And I want to thank you for your comment about my poetry. [This message has been edited by WindWalker (03-04-2009 11:33 AM).] |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
felt like I was walking through forest glades, seeing what my ancestors saw, feeling what they felt...very nicely done |
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WindWalker Senior Member
since 2001-10-12
Posts 1218 |
Just had to read this again! |
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