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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Journey Life is short Life is full of surprises This journey will take you For a long walk This life will make you understand That this journey will give you a path To walk This journey will make you smile or even cry You will try To understand why This journey should take you In a long ride You take my hand I find answers through this precious journey I find myself to find a path To follow my dreams Through this journey I know Life is short and sweet But also sorrow too We always have to understand That is always tomorrow for us Whether life is short We pray every night To follow our right path Through this journey |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
I just love your opening lines, they are simply stated and yet have so much meaning. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Life is short Life is full of surprises This journey will take you For a long walk. Nice, vandana~ |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo dear Vandana, That's a good way to look at the journey through life. This is very nice work. Love Bobby |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
vandana - many trips to take through life's journey. Nice write... BC |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
So true, dear vandana.  A |
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