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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you 
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 a shade somewhere between cotton candy and lust’s crimson hue stained my cheeks when I looked at you awkwardly in the middle of innocence and understanding having not a clue my heart would forever be hooked on you so unsure and shy tongue tied and terrified wondering if you knew every second of every day I was more in love with you and all these years have passed us ....still it remains constant with every beat, it’s still true my heart wants nothing more than to be loved by you ~SEA~ |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
fine choice of photo.-imagery. EXCELLENT slice of Romanticism! much applause for this 'penning'!! |
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Paul D. Hennigan Member
since 2009-02-03
Posts 52Texas USA |
i like, i like, i like..........did i forget to say i like..very nice write Sea |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
m suesea... you have a way of loving that is more than words..enjoyed it |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo dear SEA, This fits in well with the latest concept of literary expression, with no caps, and no punctuation. It’s rather just there, as a blob of words. Love Bobby |
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WTBAKELAR
since 2008-09-09
Posts 1089Utah, USA |
Very beautiful, Oh to be loved like that!! What a fitting gift to the beholder of your heart. Period. W.Tracey. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You outdo Hallmark with every write.  Love, Mom |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
How could any words be more romantic and openly warm than these ones you've penned here. Love can be such a thrill. Love your apt. Looks like you've just moved in or are in the process of redecorating.....(smile)..... Eric |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
SEA - you are indeed a special woman, I can see it in your writings, such as this one... BC |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Oh, I understand this oh, so, well! I have a "still...", as well! Here are a few of my favourite creatively descriptive lines ~ "a shade somewhere between cotton candy and lust’s crimson hue" "awkwardly in the middle of innocence and understanding" "so unsure and shy tongue tied and terrified" Linda |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
"and all these years have passed us ....still it remains constant with every beat, it’s still true my heart wants nothing more than to be loved by you" So beautiful, Susan. Sounds like it's here to stay!! Hugs,Ethel Ethels Love Poetry My SpiritIsUp Poetry Shelf Powered by CGISpy.com |
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Marc-Andre Senior Member
since 2008-12-07
Posts 501 |
SEA, this is an endearing writ. The third stanza is especially melodious. Mark |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Susan, do you suppose this will always be the case? Because that thought terrifies me..what if that was it and it's gone? Will we remain broken forever?  me too. "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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Windhover Member
since 2003-11-17
Posts 179UK |
Just like I always said; It takes a female to write a REAL Love poem. Beautifully done, Milady. |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
thank you all so much for your great replies  and Susan? yeah forever |
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gilead Senior Member
since 2008-03-10
Posts 1067nevada, USA |
Superlative! You take the love poem to a higher level! art |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
thank you Art very much! |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
Beautiful! I so miss reading poetry....I truly must take more time in the blue!! much enjoyed  g "...Never regret anything that made you smile..." |
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viking_metal Senior Member
since 2007-02-02
Posts 1337In a Jeep, Minnesota. |
Ms. SEA, Be careful, or you'll find me writing a series called "The Deep Blue SEA." Incredible write. I found myself relating pretty heavily. Lots of emotion, I couldn't be more hooked on you. Paul. Some people fall in love and touch the sky, some people fall in love and find quicksand. |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Hi darling girl, remember me? I remember how special your writing always has been, this is stunning work, love the flow and the shape of this. I miss so much being away from you all, however I cannot do all the things I want to do, time is far too short, and I no longer have the strength for it all. So I slip in every now and then and sip at the wonder and remember how special you all are. Take care sweet SEA As always Mushy x x x x x x x Tomorrow is another day I don't know what it holds |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: There is true excellence in your poem, dear Sue. The quoted lines bring smiles, they are such a perfect description of those first moments, when one can't even breathe because of the emotion. Love, Margherita |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
it's nice to know that this exists gives me hope I always love your stuff! |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
liked it |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
a shade somewhere between cotton candy and lust’s crimson hue stained my cheeks when I looked at you Maureen my dear, that is such a sweet poignant unburdening of the heart, top accolades for this touching poem. love to you. Lindsay |
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Raindance Member
since 2009-02-07
Posts 120West Coast |
Love speaks through you. This is beautiful. I love your writing. |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
exquisite imagery in your fine words...my favorite lines (like many others as well): "somewhere between cotton candy and lust’s crimson hue" truly a captivating vision |
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