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WTBAKELAR

Senior Member

since 2008-09-09

Posts 1089
Utah, USA

0 posted 2009-02-25 06:50 PM

WHISPERS

Whispers, just whispers, was it the wind,
Sweet breezes blow by me, where has she been,

Memories, fond memories, chased by the pain,
Voices that whisper she’s gone, again.

Lonely, just lonely, left all alone,
Moonlit shadows, heart turns to stone,

Sorrows, deep sorrows, burden the soul,
Regret and despair, claim their toll.

A moment, one moment, what did I hear?
Was it the wind, whisper she’s near?

Falling, I’m falling, into the past,
She’ll not return forever, at last.

Leaving, I’m leaving, time to move on,
Misty last memories, I’m finally done.

Breezes, sweet breezes, on new morning dew,
The wind carries her whispers,

"I’ll always love you".

The answer is always NO, Until the question is asked.

Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

1 posted 2009-02-25 07:01 PM

Yo WT,

These couplets work well for you. The poem is very well done.

Bobby

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

2 posted 2009-02-25 07:10 PM

This is a beautiful and so romantic poem.
I love it.
Hugs,
Ethel
Some of my poetry links--
Ethels Creations My Inspirational PagesEthels Heart Poems
Ethels Love Poetry My SpiritIsUp Poetry Shelf

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SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

3 posted 2009-02-25 07:11 PM

*dang*

how sad

Namyh
Senior Member

since 2009-01-20

Posts 988

4 posted 2009-02-25 08:49 PM

WTB - I love the resolve that even when love is lost but remembered, there comes a whisper from somewhere to move on. Very nicely crafted with a beat of its own. Namyh

LindsayP
Member Elite

since 2007-07-28

Posts 3410
Australia, Victoria

5 posted 2009-02-25 09:58 PM

Your're a great poet WTB and I love the way you write. Keep them coming my friend.

Take care

Lindsay

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

6 posted 2009-02-25 10:39 PM

Hard to escape the whispers WT.

Lovely twists and turns of heart thoughts here. It can be such a struggle sometimes as you portray so well.

Eric

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

7 posted 2009-02-25 10:43 PM

I always enjoy your writing WT, Good one.
Ida

WTBAKELAR

Senior Member

since 2008-09-09

Posts 1089
Utah, USA

8 posted 2009-02-26 09:43 AM

Thank you all so very much for your kind comments.

I was trying to post a picture with this, but my computer didn't see things the way I did. Go figure.

I will try again soon.

Thanks for stopping in and saying hi.

Love ya all. Tracey.

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