Open Poetry #44 |
Let's Be Magnetic. |
viking_metal Senior Member
since 2007-02-02
Posts 1337In a Jeep, Minnesota. |
"Of course I love the science museum!" Perhaps I can arrange some sort of t-rex skeleton attack. I can fight to the finish, and save the day, complete with neat one-liner . We could take some pictures, and walk back to the car. Where you won't ask me to take you home. _____________________________________ The Sadie Series. Some people fall in love and touch the sky, some people fall in love and find quicksand. [This message has been edited by viking_metal (02-25-2009 04:14 PM).] |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
museums are fun the last time I went I got to see a Titanic exhibit! That, was wicked cool. your Sadie is a lucky girl |
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viking_metal Senior Member
since 2007-02-02
Posts 1337In a Jeep, Minnesota. |
Not mine just yet, but I'm doing my best. We'll see what happens. Thanks very much, dear SEA. -P Some people fall in love and touch the sky, some people fall in love and find quicksand. |
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SEA
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since 2000-01-18
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she would be a fool not to be |
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viking_metal Senior Member
since 2007-02-02
Posts 1337In a Jeep, Minnesota. |
I agree. My butt is super nice. Some people fall in love and touch the sky, some people fall in love and find quicksand. |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
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ROFL you rock dude |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Aw c'mon it wasn't that bad. She should let you take her home..... Did you have a cape on? Maybe that's where you screwed up. Just tryin to help. I suppose that was pre cape era. Listen could you let me in on the one liner, I might need it later.....I promise I won't tell a soul... Good luck with her. She'll just have to come back, she won't be able to help herself. Eric |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo Paul, I liked this poem very much. This sounds just about right. I love those old bones too. Bobby |
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viking_metal Senior Member
since 2007-02-02
Posts 1337In a Jeep, Minnesota. |
Ethome... Thanks dude. Sorry, one liners are kept secret. The Idea of this was that she didn't want me to take her home yet, and that she wanted to be with me longer. Maybe hit up a "scenic overlook." Bobby... Thanks bud. I love the science museum, and so does she. Let's hope I get to fight a T-rex skeleton, and win. That'd be bound to win her over. -P Some people fall in love and touch the sky, some people fall in love and find quicksand. |
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tao power Member
since 2009-02-24
Posts 109 |
I bet after you kill the skeleton, you grab the girl in your arms and fix her with a smoldering gaze. With a cool smile you say "don't worry baby. i left that dino sore" or "looks like he got t-wrecked!" or maybe even "I'm going to go cenezoic on your ass" Good luck. nice poem. |
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viking_metal Senior Member
since 2007-02-02
Posts 1337In a Jeep, Minnesota. |
Haha, thanks tao. I actually thought of the t-wrecked one when I was writing this... :O -P Some people fall in love and touch the sky, some people fall in love and find quicksand. |
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