Open Poetry #44 |
hands some and glance dancing |
Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
I guess it is when you have my hands on and my eyes too and you leave everything else there in your lady place closet when we listen to secret place music and you let my mind dance with the woman of you in our cove of maybe someday colors you say they fit you better than your own when the touches and glances fit the wanting more of your shoulders and the take me higher of your toes and I say I don't mind your keeping them too if you would want to leave yours behind as something I could wear on special occasion like those waking moments between eye blinks when anything else would seem just to casual ________________ daark (forbidden) |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
good morning mister you make me want to dance.... |
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Raindance Member
since 2009-02-07
Posts 120West Coast |
This is one delicious write to read over and over. I especially like: "when the touches and glances fit the wanting more of your shoulders" deliciously creative... |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms suesea, thanks babe!! Save me a slow one? ________________ raindance, thanks so much for the read and comments |
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Indigo Senior Member
since 2001-05-17
Posts 602 |
barefoot, dancing wild to Sly and the Family Stone yeah, take me higher. Indigo |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
you say they fit you better than your own when the touches and glances fit the wanting more of your shoulders and the take me higher of your toes This is so beautiful!! Hugs, Ethel |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms indi...you are just the right height now babe..thanks for the smile _______________ ms Ethel, thanks to you for the touch and smile here |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Mind dances can be so erotic when shared with the right poet. Wanna tango with me? A |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Good God Dark! I hope you're talking about sunglasses....LOL! Loved the twists and turns in this erotic piece. Eric |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Eric... I don't think he is talking sunglasses here! Mr Daark... just wonderful! love and hugs RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms ali-san, thanks babe..long as we dance in the earthquake machine I am good with it _____________ eric...thanks guy... ________________ ms r&b thanks lady |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: Pure delight! Mind dancing is a great exercise of anticipation, indeed. Love, Margherita |
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