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Open Poetry #44

In My Dreams

Anniepimm
Senior Member

since 2008-12-26

Posts 550
England

0 posted 2009-01-03 08:40 AM

In My Dreams

I wake up in the mornings light,
And your face is in my mind,
You are the spark within my life,
You are the one i dream of time after time,

My world is based around you,
I light up when you are there,
You are the smile upon my lips,
The wind in my hair,

With every single breath i take,
My self control; wanes,
We! are just a pair of snowflakes,
On a heated window pain,

You are the candle, that lights the dark,
The water, flowing in the stream,
Your every flower; blooming in the park,
And every whisper, in my dreams,

I know this is not forever,
And all the good days must end,
But i close my eyes and think of you,
And let my heart pretend,

I see you there, amongst the embers,
Just the flicker, that's in the flame,
"Yet" you are just someone who passes me by,
That catches the morning train,

Annie,
05-09-2008

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

1 posted 2009-01-03 08:51 AM

Smiling, especially at the ending~~

M

Anniepimm
Senior Member

since 2008-12-26

Posts 550
England

2 posted 2009-01-03 01:07 PM

Thank you

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

3 posted 2009-01-03 10:09 PM

I like the surprise ending.
Ida

Anniepimm
Senior Member

since 2008-12-26

Posts 550
England

4 posted 2009-01-04 04:55 AM

Thank you Ida This is one of my fave...

[This message has been edited by Anniepimm (01-04-2009 08:17 PM).]

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