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viking_metal
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since 2007-02-02

Posts 1337
In a Jeep, Minnesota.

0 posted 2009-02-23 12:09 PM

In the wintry night,
we looked at the stars.
My lips were windburned,
and wanting.

We walked down
imaginary stairs.
I took your arm,
and you took my hand.

You made me feel
(the heartbeat in my head.)
interesting.

You made me feel
(the heartbeat in my head.)
attractive.

You made me feel
(the heartbeat in my head.)
insects with wings.

In the wintry night,
we looked at the stars.
My lips were windburned,
and wanting
of your lips.

______________________________________
The Sadie Series.

Some people fall in love and touch the sky, some people fall in love and find quicksand.

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2009-02-23 12:26 PM

*goodness*

this is so SO romantic!

loved it!

viking_metal
Senior Member

since 2007-02-02

Posts 1337
In a Jeep, Minnesota.

2 posted 2009-02-23 12:29 PM

Thanks SEA!!

Sadie and I got together over the weekend. We're going to get together again next week, during her college spring break. I'm glad I never stopped writing "The Sadie Series"...

-P

Some people fall in love and touch the sky, some people fall in love and find quicksand.

Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

3 posted 2009-02-23 12:38 PM

Yo Paul,

This is well carried off.

Just what insects with wings are we talking here? Huh?

It's good your back with Sadie.

Bobby

viking_metal
Senior Member

since 2007-02-02

Posts 1337
In a Jeep, Minnesota.

4 posted 2009-02-23 12:50 PM

Butterflies? That's my guess, I couldn't tell when they were in my stomach.

Thanks Bobby.

Some people fall in love and touch the sky, some people fall in love and find quicksand.

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

5 posted 2009-02-23 12:56 PM

Nice romantic write!

Boshii2
Member

since 2009-02-01

Posts 146

6 posted 2009-02-23 02:03 PM

walk right up those imaginary stairs and accept the trophy;you are tops.

Mark Bohannan
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since 2000-06-21

Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song

7 posted 2009-02-23 02:17 PM

Nicely penned romanticism and with a purity that shows the reality of the feelings in it. I very much enjoyed.

viking_metal
Senior Member

since 2007-02-02

Posts 1337
In a Jeep, Minnesota.

8 posted 2009-02-23 02:33 PM

MidniteSun... Thank you very much! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Boshii... I'll do my best.

Mark Bohannon... Thank you very much, sir. I'm glad to have a new reader! The series is bound to have some interesting new pieces, in the next few weeks here. Glad you found it appealing.

-P

Some people fall in love and touch the sky, some people fall in love and find quicksand.

Alison

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since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

9 posted 2009-02-25 12:22 PM

I am read. Yep, I do. You caught me with your titles and you kept me with your talent.

Alison

viking_metal
Senior Member

since 2007-02-02

Posts 1337
In a Jeep, Minnesota.

10 posted 2009-02-25 08:41 AM

Alison.... Thanks, you're the best.

I'm glad you liked the title, as well as the content.

-P

Some people fall in love and touch the sky, some people fall in love and find quicksand.

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