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a bad poem
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a bad poem |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
It's OK sweetheart, it would be your first in my mind. Eric |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
it was pretty bad...  |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
in fact? I'm wincing... |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo dear Serenity blaze, This is one of your better ones. Just pulling your long, lovely, leg Hon. Love Bobby |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Yes, I agree - and I didn't EVER think that I would ever think that about a poem of yours - but then it is all a joke anyway, so you cheated! (Whispering, "there's not much you can't do, Karen, but writing a bad poem is one of those things - you simply don't know how!).  Owl |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
It's o.k. I wince every time I shave. Now I will just have to sit here patiently waiting for the good version. tapping toes on side of head |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
 Bad poem: I am sad I walk to the park I walk home I now understand -Juju -Juju |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
the only bad poem is the write not penned, the heart never shared...inspiration takes root in a variety of soils...will look again for 'nother... |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
roses are red violets are blue this poem sucks so what! See...now THAT is a bad poem.  |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
serenity blaze - wow, h'mmmmmmm, this is an excellent one, great to read, enjoyable, touching, and etc...... Bravo, more of the same I say... BC |
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turtle Senior Member
since 2009-01-23
Posts 548Harbor |
Quote: ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Written text The asterisk is used to call out a footnote, especially when there is only one on the page. Less commonly, multiple asterisks are used to denote different footnotes on a page. (i.e., *, **, ***) ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Soooo. You're playing footsy?.....lol |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Grin. Look, Kacy! I made a turtle come out! (No matches, either!)  And I'm wondering if I'm gonna set a record for replies to ...the dreaded asterisk. Kamla? Take note, if you be around in some other guise, that is. And turtle, while yer down there, howza bouta pedicure?  |
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Blood.Wolf Member
since 2009-02-09
Posts 54GA, USA |
haha, turtle. The poem itself is not that bad. lacks content though... ^.^ better than your other poems! (just kidding) “For the strength of the Pack is the Wolf, and the strength of the Wolf is the Pack." |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Actually I tend to agree that it is better than the majority of my poems. I don't think what I do actually qualifies as poetry, in the strictest sense. It's lyric, it's prose, it's narrative, and a lot of it is crap. I just hope it's entertaining crap.  |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
((*^)) Happy Fat Tuesday - love the pic! |
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XOx Uriah xOX Senior Member
since 2006-02-11
Posts 1403Virginia |
I love the unlimited content |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Hi K.... Love the photo!! Huggies, Ethel Ethels Love Poetry My SpiritIsUp Poetry Shelf Powered by CGISpy.com |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
OOOOOHHHHH Dahling how could you wite a bad poem. I remember when we used to sing this together... We skipped the light fandango turned cartwheels 'cross the floor I was feeling kinda seasick but the crowd called out for more The room was humming harder as the ceiling flew away When we called out for another drink the waiter brought a tray And so it was that later as the miller told his tale that her face, at first just ghostly, turned a whiter shade of pale She said, 'There is no reason and the truth is plain to see.' But I wandered through my playing cards and would not let her be one of sixteen vestal virgins who were leaving for the coast and although my eyes were open they might have just as well've been closed She said, 'I'm home on shore leave,' though in truth we were at sea so I took her by the looking glass and forced her to agree saying, 'You must be the mermaid who took Neptune for a ride.' But she smiled at me so sadly that my anger straightway died If music be the food of love then laughter is its queen and likewise if behind is in front then dirt in truth is clean My mouth by then like cardboard seemed to slip straight through my head So we crash-dived straightway quickly and attacked the ocean bed Can't possibly be anything wrong wit cha! Eric |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
*laughing* Ya'll are all so lovely. thank you for the fun. |
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