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This Being Within
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This Being Within |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now 
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
lovely, Bill... both in presentation and thought.  M |
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Windhover Member
since 2003-11-17
Posts 179UK |
Impressive stuff, Sir. Flawless metre, perfect rhyme. Nice to read a properly constructed, rhyming poem. Nicely done! |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
yep  very pretty |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dear Bill, wonderful dreamy presentation in picture and words. You are the champion of true romance! Highly enjoyable! Love, Margherita |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
beautiful!! makes me think of Marge  |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice |
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Jaime Fradera Senior Member
since 2000-11-25
Posts 843Where no tyranny is tolerable |
Ohhhh Shucks! ... I was getting ready to Braille her, but since I can't I'll have to paint her with the paint brush of my mind Fell her with the colors of my soul. Jaime Friendship is for Life, if not Forever. |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Ahhh .. anyone who knows me knows my draw to the Native American spirit and understanding and I find this lovely surprise. Thanks for the vision in both words and presentation. Beautiful read here. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Ah Bill this is fabulous. I lean towards this freedom of spirit within once held so sacred by the beautiful natives of this land. True romance at it's best! Eric |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
Yes Bill, you show the touch of the master's hand with this fine poem. Much enjoyed Bill. Take care. Lindsay |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo Bill, You did it again. This is great, and lovely. Bobby |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Maureen - thank you for your words... Windhover - I'm humbled by your words, thank you very much for them, as they are truly inspirational... SEA - appreciate you stopping by for a read, and for your reply... Margherita - your words mean a lot to me, thank you... passing shadows - Marge is sorely missed... vandana - thank you for your reply... Jaime - your words are gracious, and I thank you for them. I'm touched by them. She is pretty... Mark - I'm glad that you liked this writing, for I'm also drawn to the Native American. Thanking you for your reply... ethome - your words are always meaningful, but more so with this reply. I also lean towards the freedom of spirit... Lindsay - you touch me with your more than kind words in your reply. Thank you... Bobby - You're most kind in your reply to this writing... BC |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
A lovely romantic write Bill, and artwork work match. Very nice presentation. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Fine writing...James |
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Suncleaver Member
since 2009-01-18
Posts 481Stafford England |
Fantastic work Bill. Never sigh for a better world, it's already composed, played and told. |
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Paul D. Hennigan Member
since 2009-02-03
Posts 52Texas USA |
Bill i watch all your writings with interest as you can capture my imagination, which is sometimes hard. Love when words jump off the page and you do just that. Good write! |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Bill, it is so good to read another of your romantic poems. That it is of a Native American love is like icing on the cake. There is such spirituality in the Native American culture. I am proud that it is part of my heritage. Hugs, Ethel Ethels Love Poetry My SpiritIsUp Poetry Shelf Powered by CGISpy.com |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Midnitesun - thank you for reading this writing and for your kind words... James - always nice to see you, thank you for your comment... Suncleaver - thank you for reading this writing and for your kind reply... Paul - I'm touched by your comments. It does feel good inside that my words can touch people and it gives me total inspiration to continue writing. Your comments are very gracious, thank you... garysgirl - I'm glad I was able to write this work of a Native American love story. I could almost picture myself in this writing. Thank you for your words... Almost forgot, what a great graphic at the end of your reply... BC |
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