Do you think i ask for too much?

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Open Poetry #44

Do you think i ask for too much?

gdcod2player
Member

since 2008-07-26

Posts 117

0 posted 2009-01-03 01:55 AM

I swear I could see you
Everything I want to hold on to
Everything is you

I wish I wasn’t pretending
I wish I could have you here
I wish you felt my safety now

I want to pretend to much
I want to hold you in my arms
But that is another thing I dream of
Is it to much to hold on to?
The image you left behind
It’s in my memory
I won’t let it leave

I want to help you build your life
Will you let me get close?
I can’t stand to be without you
Say something before I get brought down
Will I ever know your name?
There is nothing I can do

Don’t forget what happened
I keep feeling the same way
What am I really thinking about
Is this what it is?
I ask for too much
Is it really what I want?
Do I need to hope for something else?

Anniepimm
Senior Member

since 2008-12-26

Posts 550
England

1 posted 2009-01-03 02:10 AM

Needs and wants are always there in are lives,
And sometimes the fact we cant have is so frustrating, Excellent poem thank you for sharing..

SarBear
Member

since 2003-06-05

Posts 205
Massachusetts

2 posted 2009-01-05 01:23 AM

This is great. I really like it and can totally relate. Love hurts...

You are never asking for too much if you just want what you deserve.

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