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| Open Poetry #44 |
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Solace |
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Paul D. Hennigan Member
since 2009-02-03
Posts 52Texas USA |
All the things i have written All the words i could ever say Will never describe my feelings Of needing you in a special way Feelings that shall remain eternal My soul bound to you this way The most precious small reminders Of love extending beyond the grave Time will be the foremost enemy The world seemingly revolves so fast Days turn swiftly into endless nights Yet dreams still visit our past Begone demons that send only pain Whose heart you robbed of youthful bliss Cradle me in your arms guardian angel Grant me needed solace in your midst |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
this is heart wrenching...such ache. well done  |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Paul...Well done. Great poem, enjoyed very much your style...Paul ~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~ |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
Paul that is one great poem, Well put together with good rhyming, Top accolades my friend. Lindsay |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Enjoyed the flow and rhyme pattern much. The poem reflects the definition of the title quite well. Well done. |
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Paul D. Hennigan Member
since 2009-02-03
Posts 52Texas USA |
Thanks so very much for the kind reviews as i am new to expressing myself in words of prose and appeciative we have a place to share. |
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