Open Poetry #44 |
Along A Shore |
JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Along A Shore On the beach with my darling we walk along the shore, she knows how much I love her, she's the woman I adore. Life seems so precious in tender moments such as this, each time a wave comes to shore I kiss my sweethearts lips. JamesLee 01January 2009 |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
wonderful James!! Happy New Year my lovely friend RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
JamesMichael - brings back memories of walking the beach. Nice write... BC |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Hmmm, all those kisses she got. What a lucky woman! I hope the tides never stop coming in, James. You both deserve the love you share. A |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Dang I don't even want to know what happens if there is a tsunami wave! Or do I... ? ... Keep up the good work my friend. And the good writing, too. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
You have these warm beautiful romantic scenes down really good James....This is another one that creates lovely images.... Eric |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
JamesM...very sweet Wishing you a very Happy New Year M |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you Bill, Alison, Richy, ethome and nakdthoughts for the wonderful responses...James |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
ouah James it is so romantic, thank you for sharing. yann |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo James, This poem has excellent rhythm and meter. Bobby |
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