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A Gentle Re-Wind (accompanied by Ctowen)
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A Gentle Re-Wind (accompanied by Ctowen) |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio 
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A Gentle Re-Wiind of both leaf and mixed metaphor when you'd capture me in the passion of rhyme making one, the other's, longwise, filling the sleeve of my symetry the ease of your shadow, a tonic refurbishing lines left unpolished as vacancies, waiting, cast on the seats of winterworn branches but you hadn't come round again flightless in once, a storm, the wrens, for the most part songless, in sadness of season harkened, your voice now vies for resonance with the hailing of reverie that plays on the crosswinds and echoes the sweetness of your coming Angel in waiting, the soft humming of wing breaks the stillness of was bringing hope and faith today's tomorrows birthing is yesterday's long wing upon wing the blossoms on branches. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Michele - youse did good, like it muchly... BC |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Oooo! This was a seamless collaboration! You write so well together ~ and beautifully! There were quotable lines in each stanza!  Congrats of this successful duet! You du-et very well together! lol  Here's a hug for each of you!  Linda |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Yes, you perform both with outstanding mastery. Love, Margherita |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
This really well put together. I love how it's so coherent. Great stuff! Eric |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Nice!! |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
Thanx everyone, once more a pleasure to write with such talent! Writing a great Duet is in the understanding of each other, I enjoy writing duets for just this purpose. ... afterall, it IS who you know!! : ) |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
very nice !!! |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Hard to do a duet of poetry and make it feel as if from one pen but you two did an exceptional job on this. Excellent collaboration and mind spelling as well. Take your bows, you both deserve them on this. |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
thanks guys and dolls. Working with Ctowen comes as natural as breezes on beaches, well...something like that  |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
Ha, ha, ha .... I've crossed the G.W. once or twice on a windy day, not sure if the breeze on the beach was as comforting!! I suggest more try to write a Duet with Inky, she can help you find that something missing. Thank you for the compliment, you made it a breeze! |
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