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Open Poetry #44

I Do Have Reasons Why

HopeS
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since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

0 posted 2009-02-19 08:15 AM

I Do Have My Reasons Why

Procrastination continued
How long will it last
While still undecided
I keep going nowhere fast

Thoughts continue circling
Thats typical of me
Due to circumstance
I put it down to uncertainty

Before deciding what to do
I shall take my time
Certain I needed to be
Any decisions will be mine

Whilst still procrastinating
I postponed goodbye
Hesitation on my part
I do have my reasons why

Hope ©2009

Pilgrimage
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since 2001-12-04

Posts 3945
Texas, USA

1 posted 2009-02-19 10:24 AM

I enjoyed this one. And hey, going nowhere isn't always a bad thing to do.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

2 posted 2009-02-19 10:30 AM

Yo dear HopeS,

This would be more effective set in the third person.

Love Bobby

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

3 posted 2009-02-19 10:30 AM

A fine introspective write.

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

4 posted 2009-02-19 01:57 PM

That "circling of thoughts" can be exhausting, you have expressed this so well and it seems you know perfectly where you are heading and why.

Your poems read always beautifully.

Love and hugs.
Margherita

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